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The Boy in the Striped Pajamas is a touching story about a nine years old boy who moves to a desolated area in Auschwitz with his family where he finds nothing to do and no one to play with. He has no idea what is going on and one day he goes in the woods a sees a barbed wire. There is a bald boy in striped pajamas sitting on the other side of the fence. a boy his own age who lives a parallel, alien existence. Bruno's encounter with the boy in the striped pajamas leads him from innocence to a dawning awareness of the adult world around them as his meetings with Shmuel develop into a friendship with devastating consequences.